This blogpost is for the peer review of Alexander McCarthy's Content Outline for his QRG about the F-35 fighter plane.
Author: Alexander McCarthy
Link to Project: Content Outline
For this peer review, I decided to provide Alexander with an outlining suggestion for his content outline. He seems to have a solid idea of what he wants for his body sections, they are very well planned out. However, his opening section seems to be the part that is slacking. I noticed that I was not really able to tell what the public argument was for this project. After reading everything, I got a better sense, but from the start it should let the audience know what you are advocating for. Once this has been done, then the whole description of the body sections and closing makes better sense. Other than that, it looks like he's on the right track.
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